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Two years ago, all my family was planning a surprise party for my grandma’s 85th birthday. Everyone was excited, but nobody knew what was coming ahead. We got many people to help us prepare some of the things we needed to throw the party. We had my aunt bake a lot of bread and I helped my sister to decorate, we even made my cousin carry a lot of chairs and tables.   Each person made sure that what they did was perfect because we wanted our grandma to have the best birthday ever, yet neither of us imagined that she was going to get sick. She ended up in the hospital just the day before her birthday and spent three days in there, we were so sad and disappointed, for we knew how badly she wanted a birthday party. Thankfully, she recovered, and we got to celebrate her 85th birthday a few days later, not in the way we wanted but at least, she enjoyed it.

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  1. UnknownNovember 1, 2018 at 3:44 PM

    Hello
    check this:
    -all my family (what is "all"?)
    -we were so sad and disappointed for we knew how badly she wanted... (comma)

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